Sent in by Mervyn, a classic Dundalk written about a fi(e)ry Dundalk fan…
Lilywhites Ban
Maxi Plan
Petrol Can
Lilywhites Ban
Sent in by Mervyn, a classic Dundalk written about a fi(e)ry Dundalk fan…
Lilywhites Ban
Maxi Plan
Petrol Can
Lilywhites Ban
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Sorry, but this is not a Dundalk. The 1st/4th line has 4 syllables, the other 2 have 3. No go I’m afraid. People, I’ve been told, don’t criticise Dundalks, it’s an embryonic poetic poetic form: to which I can only say, it’s not fucking rocket science, the rules aren’t mad complicated.
Can a better Dundalk ever be written?